Branwen the Daughter of Llyr — Tale 2 Criticism

As I was starting to write a criticism, I received a book by a scholar whose field is ancient Celtic literature. The scholar, Peter B. Ellis, cautions using Lady Charlotte Guest's text. I understand from an academic standpoint. However, Ellis's book targets the popular market, making that, too, a problem. In any case, my criticism will not reach academia; and I read another translation.

I see the events of this tale as occurring immediately after the withdrawal of the Roman troops. From the west came Norse invaders, from the east Irish tribes and marauders. From my (scant) reading, it appears that the area the Irish invaded had been partly depopulated, so that resistance would not be great. In the tale, what is a welcoming of the man and woman with the pot, and the rapid growth of their numbers and fortification of their territory, likely was a remembrance of an invasion put in innocuous terms. The same might have been with Bendigeid's invasion of Ireland. Certainly, in the generation after the withdrawal of Roman troops the Welsh would not have been strong enough to invade Ireland. What might have happened is that the Welsh led a reconquest of their lands, and this was much later misinterpreted as a conquest of Ireland.

The tribes of southern Wales play a subordinate role to those of the north. The southern tribes, notably the Silures, readily adapted to Roman ways. Archeological aerial photography located a dozen Roman villas in the south. The north, occupied by the Ordovices, was garrisoned by the Romans. The Ordovices must have looked askance at the southern Welsh tribes, the territory of Pryderi, and this have found its way into the tale.

Bendigeid Vran (or Bran) is identified with Bron, the Fisher King. Vran is mortally wounded by a poison arrow in the leg. The fisher king is lame. The story of the Fisher King is a most intriguing tale in Medieval literature, but it breaks off before the ending; then, four authors took up the tale. The head of Bendigeid Vran is buried on a hill in London protecting the country from invasion, and later disinterred. This serves as a reason after the fact for why there were invasions. Ellis writes that King Arthur (in legend, of course) disinterred the head, to his regret. Ellis must have his source for this. It is not in the tale.

Red Canyon Road

 

This is a detail from a 16x20 acrylic. I used a dry brush on the rocks to simulate striations. The namesake red path at bottom is more prominent on the right side, but the sky on the left has more going on. The source material, like so many others, was a small ad photo in a magazine; a car featured prominently in the foreground, but we couldn't be having that. 

Character building: Terry Brooks interview

 Terry Brooks.  I'm sure this name is popular and you may have read his books.  So what is it about characters?  How and why do authors choose them for the story?

One of the top fantasy writers of our time who is up there with Tolkien.   As a young aspiring writer, and I was in my teens, I wrote to this author.  Surprisingly he wrote back, 

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and it was often for about five years.  I've been to the conventions and he is a very good person.  For those who couldn't afford the $100 ticket, he would go to one of the local churches to speak to a crowd.  I wanted to learn from the best.   Character development and how this top author does it.  Are writers born or made?  

Author Interviews: C.S. Lewis

 

He is a mastermind, surprisingly he also knew Tolkein.  They were very good friends and met up at the pubs or local coffee shops.  I'm always amazing how they echoed each other in their stories.

Happy Tuesday!

Stobrod Durnham

 

In a town forgotten by time

A rented white SUV bearing four occupants pulled into a muddy clearing. With the engine shut off, water drops from lofty pines were loud on the roof. The object of their quest, an ancient country store, moldered on a low rise across a rickety foot bridge. A hand-lettered sign read "Stobrod Durnham Store". It promised childhood treats no longer available in big cities--exactly what Ed wanted to save from extinction. The Outworld store in that other dimension was just the place, if he could persuade the owner to abandon the rapidly-sinking U.S.S. Earth.

Ed squinted through the trickling windshield. "Let's hope nobody's there but the owner. We might spook the locals."

"Not you, Master Ed." The dwarf Hecabano wore a logger's cap over his satyr horns. His black muscle shirt contrasted with Ed's sport coat. 

Two women, sort of, occupied the back seat. Wicca disdained her vampish stage dress in favor of a white peasant blouse and jeans. This was no place to sink Gucci heels in hog slop. The Bot queen wore jeans, sweatshirt, and gloves to conceal her goldtone plating. Beneath the black punk 'do bestowed by Wicca was a passably human mask. It served to avoid drawing attention on the highway. 

"I'll make first contact," Ed decided, getting out. "Might even have to translate. Remember--no politics."

Wicca hopped onto grassy knolls to avoid the mud. "Ha! Why don't you ask Queenie what a bad girl she's been."

"You refer," the Bot said, "to the recent military coup I engineered to hasten your demise."

Hecabano looked back under drizzly skies. "Ah. That explains why they cower behind razor wire and thirty thousand handpicked troops."

"Come on, knock it off." Ed kept a leery eye on muddy water rushing  beneath the bridge, which had no hand rails. "Stick together so he can keep a tab on us." 

An old-fashioned bell tinkled their entry. Ed savored the weathered floor boards, homespun displays, the smell of produce and pine cleaner. The joint was a bonanza of edible memories.

"I don't believe it." Ed reached into an old red cooler and extracted a  bottle. "Kickapoo Joy Juice, the precursor of Mountain Dew. Taken from the Li'l Abner comic strip. They've even got Moon Pie and squirrel nut zippers."

Wicca frowned at bags of pink, white and brown coconut drops. The undead had no need of food, but in her case, a taste for expensive booze.

It was Queenie who drew first notice from Stobrod. He rocked sedately behind the counter, sizing them up with a wizened eye. A frayed ball cap sat well back on his thinning pate. "They hell izzis?"

"Allow me," Ed said. "He wants to know what the hell this is."

Queenie's heavy tread creaked the floor boards as she went in Ed's face, having no concept of personal space. "Explanation required: how can you translate this dialect when it eludes my vastly superior processors?"

Ed puffed cheeks in thought. "I grew up with it."

"Ah lahk hern voice," Stobrod said, pushing himself erect. "Tawks lahk that thar dispatcher on Adam Twelve. Why she wearin' a maisk?"

Hecabano unloaded an armful of goodies. "Er. . . .skin condition."

"Say," Ed ventured. "I notice you're an inspection station. Could we get our vehicle done?"

"Aita why." Stobrod shrugged. 

"After awhile," Ed supplied for Queenie. "How long is that?"

Another shrug. "Bouda hai ire."

"About half an hour. Okay then."

Wicca sashayed from between displays. "Hey, Hiram, do you folks get the Wicca Horror Show in this burg?"

"The whut?" Stobrod narrowed eyes and pursed lips in confusion. "Y'all folks a-sellin' sum-un? Ah ain't buyin' nuffin. Aina gwinter." 

"I ain't going to," Ed furnished as that last remark. "No, we're buying, not selling. But I don't want to clean you out."

"You kin buy the whole shootin' match, all ah cares."

"Excellent!" Hecabano trundled off on another expedition, aiming for some pineapple bear claws from Mexico. 

"Sum-un odd heah," Stobrod drawled, staring at Wicca. "You got yella eyes, tawk kinda lahk a Britisher. Ain't never seen no hair whut shines purple lahk 'at thar."

Wicca tossed raven locks. "Ever been to Wexelt? It's in the Outworld, where the witches are."

"Yuze a witch?"

"All day, Bay Ray. It got me into the academy. Now I'm a tier seven mage."

Ed stepped between them. "Yeah, well. . . that's what we wanted to ask about." Behind his back, he waved Wicca off. "We're looking to help people relocate. I'm sure you can see where it's all headed. To use a French flair--garBAZH."

"You French?"

"Uh. . . .no."

"Din tawk plain English, lahken ah does."

Queenie came near. "I have established an algorithm which can translate this dialect with 89 percent certainty. You will continue speaking, human."

Stobrod bristled. "You a-givin' me orders? Shyte mah azz!"

"Translation:--"

"We get it," Ed hastily put in. At that moment, Hecabano returned with more treasure.

"Master Ed, what are hoarhound drops?"

Wicca laughed. "Whore hound? What a thing to call candy! Let me see." She recoiled from the brown molasses hard candy thrust at her. "I do not want to know why they call it that."

The proprietor was steadily ringing up the haul. "Yona th'ow in the inspection? Up ta twunny-fie so fur." 

"Sure," Ed said. 

"Twunny dollah."

A boy of about ten came in, wearing overalls. "I slapped on the sticker, Gramps."

"Most curious," Hecabano said. "Is there not a minimum age for certified state inspectors?"

Stobrod looked down at him. "Ah sells inspection stickers. Y'all jess boughten one."

After a short talk with Wicca, Ed asked whether Stobrod wanted to appear on the show, at the going rate of ninety dollars for a cameo.

"Me on TV?" Stobrod scratched a stubbly chin. "Gotta lemme plug the store if'n ah agrees."

Wicca clapped. "Of course you can, Stan! Outworld dimension, you've got another one!" 

Stobrod leaned toward Ed. "Dat gell ain't raht in the head parts."

"Don't I know it," Ed said. "We'll be in touch. Soon."